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Chapter For MY ENEMY, MY LOVE by Diane M. Wylie
November 1863
Mine Run, Orange County, Virginia
Captain David Reynolds of the Seventeenth
Pennsylvania Volunteer Cavalry, Company I, angrily threw
down the riding crop he had wrenched from the corporal’s
clammy grasp. “Don’t ever let me see you mistreat
your animal again, Corporal!” The prancing feet of
the huge, black stallion he rode stomped the crop deep into
the ever-present mud. “What kind of cavalryman are
you, Forrester? You’d do well to remember your horse
is your life!”
Corporal Silas Forrester’s face was
beet red under the berating he was receiving, but David
didn’t care; he had to make sure these men knew what
was most important to keep them alive. A few snickers from
the other blue-coated men in his unit, gathered around on
their own mounts, just intensified Forrester’s scowl.
“Yes, sir,” Silas responded.
“I understand completely, Captain Reynolds.”
Silas yanked hard on the reins of his still-jittery horse,
hurting the animal’s mouth. Its eyes rolled around,
whites showing as it danced and stomped in discomfort. Silas
was barely able to salute his commanding officer and remain
seated on the animal.
David regarded Silas from under the brim
of his hat, “Perhaps you had better have a few riding
lessons, Forrester. See Lieutenant Jones later today. That’s
an order!” David wheeled his own mount around and
walked the horse away towards the group of tents clustered
nearby in the open field. He could still hear the men lingering
behind him.
“Jones will fix you right up, Forrester,”
someone jeered.
“Yeah, a few lessons and you’ll
be a real cavalryman like the rest of us.” A burst
of raucous laughter followed this remark.
The last thing David heard from the group
was Lieutenant Miller, David’s right-hand man, taking
charge of the situation. “Move, soldiers!” Miller’s
Irish-accented voice boomed. “Time to make camp! Forrester,
get your horse properly settled and get some chow before
you see Jones.”
Arriving at the cluster of tents, David
dismounted, handed the reins to an aide, and strode towards
a lone officer sitting in front of the blazing campfire.
Anger was still simmering under his skin in a rush of hot
blood.
“What’s going on over there,
Dave?”
He made no answer. Grabbing a tin cup, he
helped himself to the strong, black coffee condensing into
mud over the flames, and sat on the canvas campstool, pulling
his plumed hat low over his eyes. Jack Montgomery, he knew,
was not one to be put off by his silence, no matter how
hard David tried. Sure enough, Jack asked again. “Trouble
in the ranks?”
Finally, David looked at the amused face
of his best friend, knowing that when he did, all of the
anger would diffuse away as if it had never been. There
was just no way to meet those kindly brown eyes and familiar
boyish face without being affected by the wisdom and understanding
he always found there. “Just a fool mistreating his
animal. Shouldn’t let it get to me, I know.”
Jack waved a dismissive hand. “It’s
our job to try to keep these men as fight-worthy as possible,
even if we have to tell them over and over which end of
the rifle to point at the enemy!”
David felt the tension flow out of him like
water. He pushed his hat back and regarded his old friend
with a reluctant grin. “Done that, have you?”
David asked. Jack nodded with a rueful expression. “Me,
too. I just keep telling myself that these are all good
Pennsylvania men and they will learn…eventually.”
Jack nodded again and his face brightened
suddenly. He plucked a letter from his jacket and waved
it in front of David’s face. “I got a new letter
from Lila!” He grinned and brought the letter up to
his nose for a good sniff. “Ahh, sweet perfume! I
surely wish I were with her right now rather than here with
you! You, my friend, just do not compare to my lovely Lila.”
“What does she say? Anything interesting
happening in Philadelphia?” David asked.
“Nothing much of note. She wants me
to come home…and I’d sure like to go.”
David frowned. “You can’t be
thinking of doing that, are you?”
“Oh, no, I won’t leave any more
than you will…but Dave, you could make some plans
for after the war. You could use the money your grandfather
left you to buy that farm you always wanted.” Jack
leaned closer to him, eager as always to discuss David’s
life choices.
David sighed. Jack was always trying to
get him to follow his heart, no matter how hard it was to
do that. Jack just didn’t understand. David took off
his hat, ran his fingers through his hair, then put the
hat back on, regarding his friend with a weary smile. “It
would not work out like I would want. My father would see
to it. As long as he could get to me, he would make my life
hell. Getting away from his reach is just one of many reasons
for me to stay in the army. But you already know that. Besides,
I couldn’t let you fight without me to watch your
back!”
“Right,” Jack murmured and nodded.
“…watch my back, good, good.” Then, he
opened up the letter from Lila and read it again, no longer
paying any attention to David.
Taking a sip of the strong, hot coffee,
David felt its comforting warmth spread through his stomach.
He looked around at the camp starting to settle down in
the gathering twilight. Tents and campfires were all around
them. The noise of thousands of men and horses going about
their business made for quite a racket, but David had long
since learned to block it out when necessary.
Jack gave a loud, theatrical sigh, startling
David from his thoughts, and drawing his attention back
to his friend. “Why the hell am I here in this mud
hole, cold in Virginia, with thousands of smelly men, instead
of home with my sweet Lila, snug in our bed?” Jack
asked, but didn’t wait for an answer. “You really
should get yourself a girl, Dave, old buddy. Women like
Lila make this life worth living...”
David raised his tin cup in mock salute,
stopping Jack’s discourse on the female sex. “I
know, I know. To women everywhere, especially to Lila.”
Jack began to expound enthusiastically on the virtues of
marriage to his lovely wife. David, having heard this speech
before, barely listened as his friend talked on and on.
But then David wondered, for just a fleeting moment, whether
the unsettling, growing aggression he experienced in battle
would be lessened if he had someone to come home to.
* * * *
The battle lines were drawn. It could start all over again
at any time. David sat high on a densely wooded hilltop
astride his stallion, Napoleon, with a pair of field glasses
trained on the earthen trenches and stacks of felled trees
below him. This way of fighting was something relatively
new; new since the great losses of Gettysburg. David shuddered
at the memory. That hideous clash was the last time the
two armies had ordered their men to meet the enemy shoulder
to shoulder in tight formations, across open fields, only
to watch them die by the hundreds as cannonballs mowed them
down. Now, David watched as the infantry on both sides used
shovels and axes to provide any kind of scant protection
from the guns and the carnage.
The Seventeenth Pennsylvania Cavalry, however,
did little of this type of defensive warfare. They were,
by nature, supposed to move in on horseback and strike quickly.
It was fast, dangerous and exciting work. This was what
had drawn David to join them. Ride hard into battle. Feel
the horse’s powerful strength under you, carrying
you forward, always forward. Clash with the enemy. Fight
off bayonets, dodge the bullets, and only dismount when
needed. Slash and shoot, push the enemy back, then move
on.
David’s first battle had sickened
him. Killing men with whom he had no argument, aside from
their affiliation with the Confederate beliefs, was hard
in the beginning. To ride in and see the face of a man when
your saber slashed open his gut or your bullet smashed into
his face, had made David doubt his commitment to this fight.
Gradually, with each passing skirmish and fight, he became
hardened to the screams and began to feel the strange thrill
of the battle. That feeling of joy that could accompany
the fight when the bugles blew and the horses thundered
down towards the masses of gray troops was something akin
to a religious experience now. This was something locked
deep in the nature of man that had been passed on through
centuries—man the hunter, man the conqueror, man the
beast. It was something felt in the gut and not experienced
with the mind. David knew that if you thought about what
you were doing, you could never function, and you would
be dead in the blink of an eye.
The dawn was just breaking over the eastern
horizon, but the actions of the men below indicated that
little sleep had occurred that night. Men in gray uniforms
swarmed around; they attempted to fortify their positions
and provide themselves with cover, wheeled cannons into
position, loaded rifles, fixed bayonets, and generally prepared
to fight. Scattered shots rang out. Sharpshooters were already
at work trying to pick off each other. All around David,
the Union soldiers were amassing. His company sat silently
on their mounts, awaiting the order to charge the enemy.
As they watched the activity between the trees, each wondered
how many of them would die today.
“Hold your position, men,” David
shouted, hearing his words echoed down the line.
Loud booming started. The cannons had begun
the assault. The carnage from the big guns seemed to incite
the Rebels into a more frenzied state as David watched them
scrambling to engage the enemy—his men. The spine-tingling
Rebel yell could be heard above the roar of the cannon.
David knew the plan. It was time.
David gave the order to Lieutenant Thomas
Miller, who sat on his horse to his left. “Move it
out, get into position at the bottom of this hill and quickly
now.”
“Move out!” came the order passed
from one horseman to the next, fanning out on either side
of David.
They were all battle-weary cavalry soldiers,
but sat with military bearing in the saddle, despite the
bloodstains on their blue coats, powder-blackened faces
and hands, and a bandaged injury here and there. He was
proud of his men. They were fierce fighters and loyal to
a man; even the difficult Forrester would come through,
he knew it.
Down the hill the blue line streamed, flowing
between the trees until they melded into a unit at the bottom.
The red, white, and blue flag carried by one cavalryman
billowed out in the breeze, readily visible by all who looked
on and an inspirational sight to David. He raised his arm,
saber in hand, as the horse pranced excitedly under him.
Napoleon was ready. The big horse seemed to thrive on the
noise and excitement of this war. David wondered how the
creature was going to adjust to a quiet life on the farm
he planned to buy when this war was over. If he survived,
he reminded himself. There was no time to dwell on these
thoughts. The war raged in front of them, and the men in
gray were coming closer.
The bugle’s tones rang out, its sound
distorted by the trees, but identifiable nonetheless—Colonel
Kellogg had ordered the charge.
David indulged himself with a quick look
to his right. Down the long, blue line of cavalrymen he
saw Captain Jack Montgomery, his saber raised as well. The
two men exchanged an unspoken message. Each was ready to
lead the men into battle. The familiar excitement was starting
to build in David now, and he welcomed it.
“Charge!” David bellowed, hearing
the command echoed by the other officers. A shout went up
from the cavalry. It had begun again. God save them all.
Reviews
For MY ENEMY, MY LOVE by Diane M. Wylie
Rating: 5 Angels and Recommended Read
"Diane M Wylie has created characters
that are so lifelike that the reader is dragged into all
of the agonies and joys as they occur. The author has done
considerable research into this time period, and this enthralling
story unravels as if the reader were reliving events. My
Enemy, My Love is much more than an impressive debut. It
is a heart-warming romance that will have readers sighing
as they relive “first-kiss” moments, then despairing
over the fate of the many fine young men who rode off to
battle. If you enjoy historical romance, I strongly urge
you to read this story. For this reader, it is a keeper
with a + + +!"
Reviewed by Naomi, Fallen Angels Reviews
"This [book] is so good it would be
a wonderful movie. I thoroughly enjoyed the romance between
David and Jenny. The scenes are well written taking you
into where you can just about see the lands and the characters.
There are many emotions running rapid in this book, between
friends, lovers, family and the love of lands the characters
call home. This was a page-turner and highly recommended."
Reviewed by Ruby, Fallen Angels Reviews
Rating: 5 Hearts
"Diane Wylie’s premier book,
My Enemy, My Love, is the kind of love story the reader
will want to sit and savor. From the brutality of the Civil
War, to the tender love between Jenny and David, the reader
is swept up and transported back to another time and place."
Reviewed by Gina, Love Romances
Blue Ribbon Rating: 4.5
"Diane Wylie's debut novel is sure
to take you on an emotional roller coaster ride, from the
hauntingly realistic battle scenes to the tender love scenes
between Jenny and David. If you enjoy Civil War era historical
romances, this is one book that shouldn't be passed over...
Diane Wylie is one of those up-and-coming authors we should
keep our eye on."
Reviewed by Sherri Myers, Romance Junkies
Rating: 4 Cups
"My Enemy, My Love is an emotionally
moving story of betrayal, hope and love. Jenny has never
known a love like the one she has with David and in the
turbulent times of war, together they will risk everything
to make it work. I thoroughly enjoyed this story as it relates
of how far they would go to stay together and keep their
sanity, from freeing Jenny’s father from incarceration
to rescuing David and others from an enemy prison camp.
This is definitely a wonderful story of hope."
Reviewed by Sheryl, Coffee Time Romance
Overall rating: 4 hearts
"The love between David and Jenny grows
deep and true as they fight to overcome the many challenges
and hardships of their times. Endearing family relationships
keep you turning the pages to see what will happen next.
There is just enough suspense to keep you involved and the
story flows along quickly to its conclusion. Diane Wylie
is a new voice in historical romance who will please many
fans with her fresh perspective of an old story."
Reviewer: Patrice, The Romance Studio
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